Combine, Revise, & Edit Esay

It is time to put all the parts of the esay together. Before you submit it in one MSWord document, please revise and edit it carefully; simply putting the pieces together without significant revising and editing will not gain you many points.

• Revise your introductory paragraph with your hook, 2-3 sentences of supporting details and/or evidence, and thesis statement.
• Revise all three of your body paragraphs. Make sure you are putting your best arguments forward.
• Do not use direct quotes. We are focusing on paraphrasing ideas from outside sources in this class.
• Revise your conclusion.
• Revise the whole esay using ARMS (add, remove, move, substitute).
• Edit the whole esay using CUPS (capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling).
• MLA format
• All parts to esay are attached.