Your primary post is two things. First, give us a part of business plan you think you can use help with. For instance, your mission statement. Second, tell us why you have what you have and what you are still working on so we can respond. For example, if you put your draft mission statement, tell us why you wrote your mission statement the way you did. Why are those values important? How will they guide your business practices?
In your reply to others, help them get the info they need and/or suggest how they might write the piece. Do not be insulting or rude–obviously. Focus on being a kind mentor, just like you hope the instructor will be when he or she grades you. Resources
Here is a good article on mission statements specifically. While they suggest they are optional, read closer and see they mean the one you have should be used. http://sbinformation.about.com/cs/businessplans/a/mission.htm (Links to an external site.)